Ratchet and Kiana, the second arsenal

Fiction écrite par thelombaxgirl

This is about another lombax and Ratchet, who acidentally finds her, on a search to find her long lost father...but will there friendship last?

Catégorie : Divers

Chapters: 1 chapitre • Date: Comments: 4 • Views: 196

Moyenne : 4 / 5

Statut : Terminée



Hi my name is Kiana lee. I’m an average lombax living on planet Quanlombaxian. My whole life I was an average lombax until 3 days ago when I found out the truth of my real father….his name was General Alister Asimoth…everyone says he was a traitor and I asked them. They told me that he had given up the whole lombax race and murdered 3 lombax's. The only thing I never understood was why…why would my own father betray his whole race??? I would never believe it…so I had to figure out why…
The next day I headed over to the scientific lab where one of my best friends lived. She had told me that they were working on a new experiment related to time travel. They were basing it on the great clock, the thingy that could control time throughout the universe. She had mentioned that they did need a tester for it and no one else had offered, leading me to being the tester. Maybe, somewhere in the great time continuum there was a place where I could find him and bring him back to the land of the lombax's…just maybe…


  1. Date: Chapter 1

Commentaires (4)

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Membre supprimé 6 avr. 2011 15:07:40

Its a good story so far. emoji

Avatar - GlitchKing
GlitchKing 30 nov. 2011 01:09:31

It's awesome so far
but try not getting out of character,like when ratchet said "Shiz….not again!!!!"
it's just not ratchet,it's not like him to say "shiz"

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Membre supprimé 4 avr. 2012 11:54:08

when are you doing the next chapter?

Avatar - Taz-dragon
Taz-dragon 8 juin 2012 02:25:37

Are you seriously done? Because it is marked as done.
But I really like this story, and I look forward to reading more, if there is.