Sujet : Fan Music Thread

This may be limited to my own music, though I certainly hope not.

If anyone else here writes music, feel free to post music based off the Ratchet and Clank games here.

I'll start off by saying I have a vague fan fiction idea, and since I'm not a decent writer, I may as well develop the story in music. Here's a draft piece I managed to write, though I'll probably replace it later: sounds too much like John Carpenter's "The Fog" to me. :P

http://soundcloud.com/sgtyayap404/revivals

UPDATE: Changed the link, as it's publicly accessible, now.

A better version of the same piece.

http://soundcloud.com/sgtyayap404/timecrash-revivals-final

Also, here's the story behind this piece. It's supposed to be like a soundtrack, just so everyone knows.

It starts at the end of A Crack in Time: it is revealed that Alister Azimuth actually survived the events of The Great Clock but only regained consciousness after abandoned by the duo. Realizing he is still alive, he beats himself up over what he did, and leaves to try to find Ratchet.

Meanwhile, a final anomaly caused by the events of The Great Clock appears in an abandoned alleyway on Marcadia. A being is sent into the present whose physical details are hard to distinguish due to time of day. Finding a fake gask mask nearby, he puts it on, and is officially ready to start a rather dire series of events.