Sujet : Ratchet & Clank Cartoon

YEEEESSSSS I love it when i can make them look naaastay

Hehe We already have a very big crew! *Me Happy*

Just one last question.. are they intelligent?

Filipuntik, Darkstar, is the scrip you posted a ready version, or just "basic". Since I see aster is born ready to start the work BTW, I have some suggestions for it:
- when the tornado turns agains Ratchet, he starts to scream "Why do you fail me again SIXAXIS?"
- when Ratchet and Clank come to serwers, there's an "ameboid extinguisher" on a wall
- When Ratchet start talking to Slim, he's in a container drifting with sewage. But when it starts to get away friends suddenly hear him from another container coming from the other side

Pretty lame jokes, but I think they can pass. Do you agree on that Darkstar and Filipuntink.

Just one last question.. are they intelligent?

Yes, they are.

- when the tornado turns agains Ratchet, he starts to scream "Why do you fail me again SIXAXIS?"
- when Ratchet and Clank come to serwers, there's an "ameboid extinguisher" on a wall
- When Ratchet start talking to Slim, he's in a container drifting with sewage. But when it starts to get away friends suddenly hear him from another container coming from the other side

That's… just… awesome!
I think you can feel free with such minor changes. If you don't mess up the whole storyline
Whyt do you think, Darkstar?

Haha, i really like the SIXAIS one!

Filipuntik, Darkstar, is the scrip you posted a ready version, or just "basic". Since I see aster is born ready to start the work BTW, I have some suggestions for it:
- when the tornado turns agains Ratchet, he starts to scream "Why do you fail me again SIXAXIS?"
- when Ratchet and Clank come to serwers, there's an "ameboid extinguisher" on a wall
- When Ratchet start talking to Slim, he's in a container drifting with sewage. But when it starts to get away friends suddenly hear him from another container coming from the other side

Pretty lame jokes, but I think they can pass. Do you agree on that Darkstar and Filipuntink.

That'd be cool, and the script is mostly ready, if anything is added it won't affect the artists.
Maybe Gerben can add the sujestions posted.

Glad you like it I think we should discuss with artists tomorrow on how are they going to work (it will be probably Toasty and aster drawing and Heather coloring). They also need to choose, who's doing what (so it won't turn out you did the same scenes separatly).

If Aster is still doing the robots, I can draw R&C and the buildings, and if Heather's still coloring and inking with Photoshop, chances are it'll look good up close. I'll do as much as I can, but I can't make any promises yet as to when it can be finished.


I like the script, btw, and the storyboard is really helpful.

If Aster is still doing the robots, I can draw R&C and the buildings, and if Heather's still coloring and inking with Photoshop, chances are it'll look good up close. I'll do as much as I can, but I can't make any promises yet as to when it can be finished.


I like the script, btw, and the storyboard is really helpful.

So, should I continue it then? I really thought it's useless… Oh well, another way to help

I'm probably gonna draw the concept art for the Robot tomorrow, and i'm gonna draw it on Paper. Real, physical, paper. I can upload the scanned versions, but we should make a digital version of them.

Toasty, could you do that? Or i can try to do it, but i'm really not sure how good it will look..

I'm probably gonna draw the concept art for the Robot tomorrow, and i'm gonna draw it on Paper. Real, physical, paper. I can upload the scanned versions, but we should make a digital version of them.

Toasty, could you do that? Or i can try to do it, but i'm really not sure how good it will look..

Toasty is doing all his work on paper too It's Heather who's responsible for 'digitalizating' and coloring the drawings.

Here're some (hopefully) future Wrench quotes Kubak can use as a guide to his voice:

"The Dimensions are with you young Lombax, but you're not a true Lombax yet."

"Ratchet, I am your father… *spoilers*"

So, should I continue it then? I really thought it's useless… Oh well, another way to help

If you want to, of course. I was afraid I was going to need to bust out the Perspective ruler for all the panels including buildings. *phew*

Here're some (hopefully) future Wrench quotes Kubak can use as a guide to his voice:

"The Dimensions are with you young Lombax, but you're not a true Lombax yet."

"Ratchet, I am your father… *spoilers*"

Soooo… he's not a clone made by Drek after all? Or is he lying? Or joking?