since my summer Vacation starts at June 15,i figured i continue my fan fiction,so expect the second chapter sometime after June 15
in the remaining time,what would you like to see in the Fan Fic?
(I will try my best to fit it in,but if I don't plan to or it's not on topic,I won't)
also,i will change the title,the adventures of ratchet doesn't seem right
maybe call it "A Lost Friend" *WINK WINK* 
How about… As time Rushed past, Ratchet thought that he lost his best friend and indeed he has. The universe would never seem the same ever again. Ratchet must now avenge his best pal Clank's death. But what could be possibly do? Their lied clanks cold metal body, Ratchet looked around, It was a moment of disbelief, frustration and anger, it was all too unreal to be true. He held clank's cold metal body in his arms and limped off to a parked ship, He gently places clank on the passenger seat… every hero has it's downfall someday, for Ratchet… it was today, "clank old pal, I'm sure gonna miss you" he softly whispers, in a mere split second Ratchet breaks down in tears…
That's all I could come up with 
How about… As time Rushed past, Ratchet thought that he lost his best friend and indeed he has. The universe would never seem the same ever again. Ratchet must now avenge his best pal Clank's death. But what could be possibly do? Their lied clanks cold metal body, Ratchet looked around, It was a moment of disbelief, frustration and anger, it was all too unreal to be true. He held clank's cold metal body in his arms and limped off to a parked ship, He gently places clank on the passenger seat… every hero has it's downfall someday, for Ratchet… it was today, "clank old pal, I'm sure gonna miss you" he softly whispers, in a mere split second Ratchet breaks down in tears…
That's all I could come up with
not bad,but im pretty sure i did this in the beginning of the chapter,but i will add the tears part maybe,you'll see,im looking forward to it,but did you read it?
Yea bro, I did read the whole thing, It's pretty epic
Yea bro, I did read the whole thing, It's pretty epic
thanks!
Good! I look forward to seeing what happens. I believe I may be following this fiction.
