Thread: Ratchet & Clank Cartoon

So, should I continue it then? I really thought it's useless… Oh well, another way to help

If you want to, of course. I was afraid I was going to need to bust out the Perspective ruler for all the panels including buildings. *phew*

As for the buildings, here's some helpfull piece of concept art:

Here're some (hopefully) future Wrench quotes Kubak can use as a guide to his voice:

"The Dimensions are with you young Lombax, but you're not a true Lombax yet."

"Ratchet, I am your father… *spoilers*"

…'s employee of the year..

Are you sure you're gonna go with that Star Wars story? I don't really like that, the story of Kaden is more like Insomniacs Job, if you know what i mean..

Soooo… he's not a clone made by Drek after all? Or is he lying? Or joking?

Did anyone say Drek here?
Ahem… get ready for…

Oh… Kubak, the sentence is not whole. You better guess

Are you sure you're gonna go with that Star Wars story? I don't really like that, the story of Kaden is more like Insomniacs Job, if you know what i mean..

It's flexible. And there isn't much of Kaden

Here're some (hopefully) future Wrench quotes Kubak can use as a guide to his voice:

"The Dimensions are with you young Lombax, but you're not a true Lombax yet."

"Ratchet, I am your father… *spoilers*"

…'s employee of the year..

Are you sure you're gonna go with that Star Wars story? I don't really like that, the story of Kaden is more like Insomniacs Job, if you know what i mean..

This just goes to show how a little reference gets you all alarmed

Here're some (hopefully) future Wrench quotes Kubak can use as a guide to his voice:

"The Dimensions are with you young Lombax, but you're not a true Lombax yet."

"Ratchet, I am your father… *spoilers*"

…'s employee of the year..

Are you sure you're gonna go with that Star Wars story? I don't really like that, the story of Kaden is more like Insomniacs Job, if you know what i mean..

This just goes to show how a little reference gets you all alarmed

Alarming people is very satisfacting I guess

What if something was a hat, now it isn't a hat, but it has a hat and still works as the previous hat?

What if something was a hat, now it isn't a hat, but it has a hat and still works as the previous hat?

Tachyon's crown counts as a double hat…

Ok, I guess I'll have to be direct.
Try to make Wrench sound like Vader (just a little bit though).

Ok, I guess I'll have to be direct.
Try to make Wrench sound like Vader (just a little bit though).

I was only kidding with Tachyon Sure, I'll do my best… tomorrow. Good night everyone!

Tachyon's crown counts as a double hat…

Is that even a hat?
IT'S A CRAGMITEFRICKING CROWN!

Filipuntik, Darkstar, is the scrip you posted a ready version, or just "basic". Since I see aster is born ready to start the work BTW, I have some suggestions for it:
- when the tornado turns agains Ratchet, he starts to scream "Why do you fail me again SIXAXIS?"
- when Ratchet and Clank come to serwers, there's an "ameboid extinguisher" on a wall
- When Ratchet start talking to Slim, he's in a container drifting with sewage. But when it starts to get away friends suddenly hear him from another container coming from the other side

Pretty lame jokes, but I think they can pass. Do you agree on that Darkstar and Filipuntink.

Funny jokes

Filipuntik, Darkstar, is the scrip you posted a ready version, or just "basic". Since I see aster is born ready to start the work BTW, I have some suggestions for it:
- when the tornado turns agains Ratchet, he starts to scream "Why do you fail me again SIXAXIS?"
- when Ratchet and Clank come to serwers, there's an "ameboid extinguisher" on a wall
- When Ratchet start talking to Slim, he's in a container drifting with sewage. But when it starts to get away friends suddenly hear him from another container coming from the other side

Pretty lame jokes, but I think they can pass. Do you agree on that Darkstar and Filipuntink.

That'd be cool, and the script is mostly ready, if anything is added it won't affect the artists.
Maybe Gerben can add the sujestions posted.

Okay, so can you tell me everything that wrong, or what i have to add in the Opening Post?

Glad you like it I think we should discuss with artists tomorrow on how are they going to work (it will be probably Toasty and aster drawing and Heather coloring). They also need to choose, who's doing what (so it won't turn out you did the same scenes separatly).

Yes, we're gonna do that.

If Aster is still doing the robots, I can draw R&C and the buildings, and if Heather's still coloring and inking with Photoshop, chances are it'll look good up close. I'll do as much as I can, but I can't make any promises yet as to when it can be finished.


I like the script, btw, and the storyboard is really helpful.

Okay, that's a good plan!

Weekend is coming! Free time (that's probably already taken by homework and housework) begins! So, since the script is ready, I'll continue my storyboarding (I won't be able to make part 2 today, but I'll sure spend time on drawing some panels tomorrow - at least 3) and will record final version of my voice. Do you have time for the project now animators? Also, I think we won't find any composser Gerben, we just need to take the games' score.