Sweet Buttery Monkeys! That is hard to read.
Next time, try to work on your sentence structure and paragraphs before you post a long message like this. Hate to sound blunt here but if you're planning to type a long story like this in the future, nobody is going to read it. I know no one is perfect in this world, but at least make the post edible to read through.
I agree! That was way too much to post in one comment!