Comments - Ratchet and Clank Future: The Homecoming

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PipoTachyon Nov 28, 2010, 6:05:14 AM

wow! Amazing! Very discriptive and crystal clear details! I look forward to your upcoming chapters!

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KiwiLombax15 Nov 28, 2010, 8:05:50 AM

coming up next: who will be the lombax to undertake this dangerous mission? Will it work? And why am i asking you all these questions? Stay tuned!

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PipoTachyon Nov 29, 2010, 1:02:50 AM

@KiwiLombax15
    "coming up next: who will be the lombax to undertake this dangerous mission? Will it work? And why am i asking you all these questions? Stay tuned!"
*brain emplosion*

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KiwiLombax15 Dec 9, 2010, 7:44:14 AM

wow! Over 2000 viewings! Thank you all so much!

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Deleted user Jan 13, 2011, 10:53:20 PM

This Fan-Fic ROCKS!!

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KiwiLombax15 Feb 3, 2011, 2:38:30 AM

Gahhhh! Chapter 6 is taking…so…long!
Curse you, writers block!

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Ratchetruler Feb 12, 2011, 6:41:42 AM

You fanfic is like a sequal! If this was a movie or a book, it would sell very well. Well i'd certainly get it! emoji

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KiwiLombax15 Feb 21, 2011, 10:58:52 PM

I am planning on doing some improvements to my fan fiction. Constructive critisism is greatly appreciated!

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RatchetGamer Feb 28, 2011, 2:23:59 PM

@KiwiLombax15
    "Gahhhh! Chapter 6 is taking…so…long!
    Curse you, writers block!"
What is writers block?

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KiwiLombax15 Mar 1, 2011, 2:33:02 AM

It's when you have no idea what to write about. But I think it's starting to shift emoji

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KiwiLombax15 Mar 6, 2011, 6:49:00 AM

Sorry to double post, but I FINISHED CHAPTER 6!!!

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RatchetGamer Mar 6, 2011, 7:19:02 PM

Awesome! I can't wait for chapter 7! emoji

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RatchetGamer Mar 27, 2011, 10:15:47 PM

Sorry for double-posting, but chapter 8 is so EPIC!! Your fanfic is the best one I have ever read! emoji

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KiwiLombax15 Mar 28, 2011, 12:21:56 AM

I've been thinking about rewriting my earlier chapters. I had more experience with the later ones so the first few are too short and don't have enough detail.

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RatchetGamer Mar 28, 2011, 12:30:21 AM

I think the earlier chapters are fine the way they are.