Rabid_Moustace, your signature links here: http://en.ratchet-galaxy.com/%22https://vita.lbp.me/v/kpcdy%22
And that doesn't work. It should be this: https://vita.lbp.me/v/kpcdy
I don't know what I did wrong for that, the site told me to just C&P the script and it will create a link to the LBP.me site, but ah well.
So I read your criticisms, I assume you had trouble with finding out you had to jump into the hole below the entrance so I made it so it spawned another arrow to tell the player to go down it, I also added a cut-scene after the player gets the tether-less jet-pack to show that the player needs to go back up the hole to the house.I hope this fixes what you were talking about.
I've also attempted to fix the lag by getting the sack-bots to spawn at different times, I while it still lags it does it less if the player doesn't fail at that section.
I feel that I must thank you for the advice.